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Can you see through me...
Can you feel my pain?
Do you endue my sorrows and do you rejoice my gain.
Then why is it you ask of me, to be someone I can not be.

Can you not feel my heart is yearning!
Can you not see my eyes are tearing,
And can you not hear, what my ears are hearing!
Or are you just really blind and deaf,to hear and see the freedom,
the love and the talents god has given me.

Why do you wish to follow this path?
What is it you search for?
What is it you ask?

Why do you pretend to love?
Why do you pretend to live?
Why wont even try and see what life is like,
if you are you and I am me.

Soon you will see how it all ends,
soon you will not be able to pretend.

Because all that lives, breathes, feels and sees
will be gone and there will be no life to carry on.

All one needs in ones life, is to see that there is nothing wrong
in being the best you can be.

But you refuse to listern, you refuse to see,
You have taken away my life,
You have taken away me.

Our lives in this world has no meanings or no value,
listern well, and you will see this is what GOD is trying to tell you.

We live for him and him alone and he decides when we shall come home.
So hear me if you will not see, and see me if you will not hear,
I have no regrets and no fear,
For verily the almighty is near.

I know my life would not exist without the gentle raising of his fist.
He is the giver of it all,
he is the catcher when we fall.
He has shown us the treasures in life...
and for us he has opened the doors of paradise.

Know this and believe when I say It Is true,
He is the Almighty and to him belongs all that is due.
Help me! to change this world and this race to make this life a better place.
©2006-2009 ~JovialCompanion
:iconjovialcompanion:

Author's Comments

This poem is an indication of the way I feel we are entrapped in a materialistic world. being controlled and influenced by others.
your life is you own
Live it to the way you wish not the way others wish you to
Every man is responsible for his own happiness.

Happiness is enhanced by others not implicated by them.

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:iconshamefaced:
WOW, yaar, that beautiful!

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In part, art completes what nature cannot elaborate; and in part, it imitates nature - Aristotle

=new-ZA *painters *Better-When-Wet *watercolorists *TraditionalArt ~Hello-SouthAfrica
:iconjovialcompanion:
Thanx yaar, im glad you liked it.
but most of all im glad iv got a yaar like you:).

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All people smile in the same language :)
:iconmusicrocksgbv:
Gorgeous and this is just the kind of thing I would like to proclaim to the whole world! That's one reason why I started this club recently, ~ChristianPoetSociety. I would be honored to see this up there...it was just started a few days ago so it's not very...organized yet...but this is an amazing message that everyone needs to hear.

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"No matter how dark the night, morning always comes, and our journey begins anew." -Lulu, FFX
I don't believe in luck because God doesn't gamble.
XO and >:F are AWESOME faces. :~~)
:iconjovialcompanion:
please feel free to use this poem in your club sorry for not replying sooner to you.hpe it will inspire..

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All people smile in the same language :)
:iconmusicrocksgbv:
OH! Thanks! I hope it will too.

--
"No matter how dark the night, morning always comes, and our journey begins anew." -Lulu, FFX
I don't believe in luck because God doesn't gamble.
XO and >:F are AWESOME faces. :~~)
:iconjovialcompanion:
Np...
njoy.
:)

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All people smile in the same language :)

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